<div dir="ltr"><div><div>Awesome, Federico!<br><br>One suggestion I have is just to include a short verbal summary of each graph, though I'm guessing you already intend to do that (eg; "In this particular example though, Babel, BMX7 and
OLSRv1, with almost all packets being under 10ms, outperforms Batman-adv and
OLSRv2, which “only” have 80% of the packets under 10ms."). <br><br></div>An abstract / summary at the beginning of the article would also be excellent. Apologies to make suggestions without volunteering to do the work myself, but it's definitely out of my depth. <br><br></div>To all working on documentation or any related written content, do feel free to ping me if you'd like me to look over the text for any grammar/spelling errors or linguistic awkwardness. I have some years of experience copyediting undergraduate essays :)<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div>Jenny<br><br></div><div>Help open a people-powered common space in Oakland, California!<br></div><div><a href="https://omnicommons.org/donate" target="_blank">https://omnicommons.org/donate</a><br>
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<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Sep 1, 2015 at 11:07 AM, Nemesis <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:nemesis@ninux.org" target="_blank">nemesis@ninux.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<blockquote type="cite">Just a quick note to say how much I admire and
appreciate the thoroughness, organization, and elegant beauty of
this documentation work. Very helpful as I compose my posts on the
conference. Bravo! Truly impressed. </blockquote>
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Arial, sans-serif">Very appreciated, thank you Jenny.<br>
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<font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">It's almost ready,
BTW.<br>
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